Yonatan Torah

Hi, I hope you are doing well! Thank you so much for your patience. I'm excited to share the first draft of your album design!

Please review each page and add comments if you would like changes. Please remember to press the ENTER/RETURN key after each comment you add. When you have finished your comments, please click the "Send Comments" button. Otherwise, if you are happy with the design, please click "I Approve My Album".

Thank you,

Nir

please crop picture on page 1 so we can't see the closet and some of the socks on the ground 2020-07-22 10:02:24

please eliminate the middle pictures of Rinat preparing Yonatan OR both images not near each other. 2020-04-30 17:13:56

please swap bottom picture on page3 with the middle top picture 2020-07-22 10:03:38

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please eliminate the picture on the right.ill see if i have a less photoshopped image 2020-04-27 18:10:59

i don't have another image.please eliminate. 2020-04-27 18:22:51

please make picture on page 8 smaller 2020-07-22 10:04:45

page 9-10 please eliminate the picture on the right 2020-04-27 18:04:54

please eliminate the picture on the right page 2020-04-30 17:04:15

please make the picture on page 10 smaller 2020-04-30 17:14:28

please eliminate the picture on the right 2020-07-22 09:29:59

please switch places of the two pictures on page 12. 2020-04-30 17:16:41

please switch the large image on page 13 with one of the pictures on page 14 2020-04-27 18:24:21

please eliminate the bottom picture on page14 2020-07-22 09:30:57

please put Talya's pictures scattered and not side by side. 2020-04-30 17:19:08

please switch the picture on page 15 to the version I emailed you just now. 2020-07-22 09:45:48

you didn't email me the photo 2020-08-28 11:05:17

i just did1 2020-08-28 11:54:46

please eliminate the picture on the bottom left 2020-04-27 18:07:41

please eliminate the picture on page 24 and combine the other two into one page 2020-07-22 10:06:51

combine to the spread or a page? if its just a page then you will have a blank page 2020-08-28 11:05:57

keep as is 2020-08-28 11:56:35

please swap top middle picture with top right picture 2020-07-22 09:54:30

cant because Yonatan face will be in the middle 2020-08-28 11:06:12

please eliminate bottom picture on page 33 2020-07-22 10:09:16

please eliminate top right picture on page 34 2020-07-22 10:09:50

both pictures in the bottom are the same.please eliminate the middle one. 2020-04-27 18:09:43

please eliminate bottom right image 2020-07-22 10:11:12

please swap right bottom picture with bottom middle 2020-07-22 10:13:41

please eliminate the picture all the way left 2020-04-27 18:06:13

please make the picture on the left smaller 2020-04-30 17:20:49

please eliminate the two pictures with Talya and the basket.they are already on page 46 2020-05-12 18:49:10

page 43,sorry. 2020-05-12 18:49:46

please crop the shirt on the left of the left picture. 2020-04-27 18:12:20

please eliminate the picture on page 54 top (not the rabbi picture) 2020-04-27 18:14:33

and same with bottom right of page 53 2020-04-27 18:26:41

please switch the larger picture with the one on the bottom right(keep them all just change size please. 2020-04-27 18:28:30

please put the large picture in black and white and the bottom small one in color. 2020-04-30 17:08:40

I switch them back, do you mean make it in color? I cant do that since the photo has too much flare and it won't look so good 2020-05-07 16:14:53

i don't mean the color, just that the bottom image on right will be the large one.thanks. 2020-05-07 21:10:49

ok, im confused about this page is this how you want it to look? 2020-05-12 16:05:20

yes! 2020-05-15 18:07:53

please eliminate top image on page 67 2020-07-22 10:17:51

please eliminate the two bottom pictures on the right 2020-04-27 18:17:17

please eliminate the bottom right picture on page 76 2020-07-22 09:39:17

please eliminate the two top pictures. 2020-07-22 10:00:59

please switch the large picture with the top left one (with Yonatan) 2020-04-30 17:10:46